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The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No (Star Trek XI, Kirk/Spock)

Title: The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Kirk & Spock belong to each other. The story belongs to me. Everything else belongs to Paramount.
Note: Written for Rin & Aza. Live long and prosper!
Major kudos to my beta Tekko (dissociate), who spent a long time discussing the plot with me and was highly instrumental in its completion. She is also an awesome American English->Spockese translator.
Oh and it's my first piece of completed ST fanfiction. I would really appreciate feedback, especially constructive criticism. :D
Word Count: 2253

The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No
by Renata Lord
(snowlight)

My serenade to the original OTP. ^_^Collapse )

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Finis

Comments

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Ohhh, oh. This was so sweet and lovely and beautifully in character, I loved this so much. Your Kirk and Spock voices were perfect in this. ♥ x 1000
Thank you! And your icon is SUCH win. XD
Oh, the one-two sucker punch of snark and sex love! (oh wait, that's more than two).

Wonderfully written, and so touching. Bravo!
i love this so much. i hope for their sake they don't meet the same end in this new reality. i'm getting really sad thinking of poor lonely spock.

i want them to go to florida and live by the beach in lobster-print shirts and drink margaritas like fabulously gay grandpas, lol.
As I say to my friends: 6 billion Vulcans and an entire bloody planet died for the reboot. I sure as hell am going to use it!

i want them to go to florida and live by the beach in lobster-print shirts and drink margaritas like fabulously gay grandpas

ROFL, and then they discover all the slash online and Spock goes, "fascinating".
Oh my god!
That's is so gorgeous and brilliant!
And so very, very beautiful!
Everyone's already said what I had to say, and done it better, but.

This was really a beautiful piece. Really.
Uh, what other story? *looks innocently*

Seriously though, now I feel pressure, of all things. This is not my usual writing style. ^_~
Awww! I got a horrible lump in my throat at the end. This was just lovely. The part where Kirk was sorry he worried Spock, but more sorry because he knew he'd do it again - that was perfectly romantic, while still being in-character. Great!
Yeah thanks! That's a huge part of my love for them...how their love for each other, while so deep and abiding, would not interfere with their duty. They would not fall in love with a man who is any less than that.
This was beautiful. I loved it. ♥
<3 Loved it.
Awwww. That was so sweet and lovely.
adorable
Fancy seeing you around! :DDD What coincidence, and a pleasant one at that.

I know your writings well enough from AS/MS to know that I won't be disappointed with this. True enough, I didn't, and I think you captured the dynamics of the new Kirk and Spock brilliantly. I love how some 'yes'es are overt, some subtle, but overall it took my breath away.

+mem for the great job as per usual :D
OMG hai!!! It is a small world eh? :P

I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you are doing well. :) I think I'll be doing ST for a while to come so if you stick around you'll see me again, I'm sure. Until then, I leave you with the Vulcan sign, my friend.
Oh. I got a little choked up there at the end.

That the only "no" was Spock's refusal to like without Jim. Beautiful.
Gorgeous and romantic, in the best possible way, while keeping these two men in character. I thought Spock's dialogue especially good. So glad I found this and read it.
Thank you. ^o^ Much of the Spock dialogue credit goes to dissociate, my translator from English to Spockese. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Oh sweet Lord this is one of the best things I have ever read. Nnnngghhh. Characterization, of both of them, is completely perfect, as is the ending which made me want to flail like a mad thing. This is beautiful. Thank you. :D
Wow thanks. :D

And I'm glad I'm not the only one who does that "flail like a mad thing" when I see a fic I love. XD
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