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The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No (Star Trek XI, Kirk/Spock)

Title: The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Kirk & Spock belong to each other. The story belongs to me. Everything else belongs to Paramount.
Note: Written for Rin & Aza. Live long and prosper!
Major kudos to my beta Tekko (dissociate), who spent a long time discussing the plot with me and was highly instrumental in its completion. She is also an awesome American English->Spockese translator.
Oh and it's my first piece of completed ST fanfiction. I would really appreciate feedback, especially constructive criticism. :D
Word Count: 2253

The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No
by Renata Lord

My serenade to the original OTP. ^_^Collapse )




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Oh. Wow. This made me feel very melty.
SO good. You did such a wonderful job with the dialogue, and the ending was really beautiful.
I can't say how much I enjoyed this, especially the Kirk voice, although they were both fantastic.
Oh that last one just made my heart ache in all the right ways. *wipes away tears* Simply beautiful! <3

Absolutely lovely work. Thank you for this!
Thanks! (OMG, that icon of yours, awesome!)
Sorry to repeat what's been said like a thousand times now, but this is LOVELY and perfectly characterized! The subtlety of the no in the last one escaped me at first.. then I realized that your writing captured me so completely, I forgot about the title :] You win.
I'm saving some nuST fics to read eventually. I'm rather sure I won't be able to comment once I read them, so I'm letting people know that I selected the stories to read according to the intro and the comments. Yours is one of them. :)
This is really beautiful! I can't find the words to say how much I love this fic, I think it captures both characters and the relathinship between them brilliantly, it feels real. And Spock's no at the end ... perfect, seriously... perfect
that was just wonderful. i don't know why, but i'm kind of against reading fic for star trek because i love the movie so much that it's hard to tolerate bad writing, and also because for me, jim & spock are inextricably linked with chris & zach, so the characterization is really hard to get down, and so the the bar is already set really high... but this i really enjoyed.


p.s. any incoherence in this comment is due to the fact that it's 2am *twitch*
I'm glad you enjoyed it despite your reservations in general. :P

P.S.: You think reading XI K/S with CP&ZQ in mind is hard? Try writing XI fanfic with TOS K/S images in your head...it got really weird at times, let me tell ya. :P
ksjadghkasga dying. the last part just.. omg. solid hit.

this was just lovely. with just the right amount of sap. love this fic. ♥
Hehe, thanks!

When I finished it I thought I must had gone crazy...I can't remember when was the last time I wrote so much sap! But K/S did that to me. :P
This was really, truly lovely. ♥
Great story!
This was amazing. Your Spock was so cannon. And Kirk -- the same way. You're amazing.
These were very sweet. I liked them.
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