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The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No (Star Trek XI, Kirk/Spock)

Title: The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Kirk & Spock belong to each other. The story belongs to me. Everything else belongs to Paramount.
Note: Written for Rin & Aza. Live long and prosper!
Major kudos to my beta Tekko (dissociate), who spent a long time discussing the plot with me and was highly instrumental in its completion. She is also an awesome American English->Spockese translator.
Oh and it's my first piece of completed ST fanfiction. I would really appreciate feedback, especially constructive criticism. :D
Word Count: 2253

The Four Times Spock Said Yes to Jim Kirk and the One Time He Said No
by Renata Lord

My serenade to the original OTP. ^_^Collapse )




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this is lovely.
Wow, so lovely and moving!
This was stunning, especially the last part.

On an unrelated note, your journal design is lovely.
Thanks. ^^ My layout was done by thefulcrum. Lots of great stuff there!

I loved it. Since the newest movie, I've gone from rather indifferent about the Kirk/Spock ship to a die-hard believer. I blame fics like this.

*Add to memories.*

Thanks! I'm glad I could help making people see the light that is K/S. XD
I've been meaning to comment on your story for a while now, and I couldn't and still can't put into words how gorgeous this was. I love "5 things" stories, and you've written such a wonderful one here, with a great build-up to the one time that Spock "no" to Jim. Just... &hearts &hearts &hearts

Thank you!

Edited at 2009-06-01 04:58 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! ^^ It really means a lot for me to hear that. I hope you will enjoy my other works as well. <3
Beautifully done.
Aigh, this was incredibly gorgeous.
Oh wow. I love your Spock, how he's thrumming with intense emotion barely buried beneath the surface. This is gorgeous.
Oh thank you. ^^ It's mostly written from Jim's POV so I hoped that I would get Spock's emotions across right. Thanks for the feedback. :D
This is... *can't find adequate words*... absolutely beautiful! ♥


Oh god. This was amazing. The level of devotion between the two (especially with Spock's refusal to continue without Jim) is heart-rending and beautiful.
just lovely.
Lovely writing. You've managed to make it so very *them.*
yay!!! :D liked this v. much.
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